Tuesday, September 6, 2016

100 word count

As I walk out onto the empty black stage I feel a huge weight on my shoulders, making it hard to breath. The air is cool and the judges eyes are glued to me. The microphone is standing there, helpless, until my voice fills the room. When I reach the centre of the stage, a chill manages to creep down my spine. I take a deep breath, and begin to sing. My whole career is riding on this song and I can't afford a failure. When I finish the song, my heart pumping with adrenaline, the judges whisper and murmur. Suddenly my whole body starts buzzing with nervousness and I am about to leave, but then the judges announce that I made it through! This is when I think, "Well what a start!"

5 comments:

  1. A great account of your audition, Elenoa! It sounds just like the TV programme called 'X-Factor'. Just check your vocabulary - you wrote 'carrier' and I think you meant 'career'.
    Keep singing and writing
    Mr Hales - England

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  2. A great account of your audition, Elenoa! It sounds just like the TV programme called 'X-Factor'. Just check your vocabulary - you wrote 'carrier' and I think you meant 'career'.
    Keep singing and writing
    Mr Hales - England

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  3. Hi Elenoa,
    I really enjoyed reading your story.
    I loved how you described how you felt about the audition, both before and after. It was so much better than just saying that you were nervous.
    I'm glad you made it through. Yes - I agree - what a great start!
    Keep up the great work.
    Looking forward to reading many more of your adventures.
    Mrs Boyce,
    Ireland.

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  5. Hi there, my name is Lucy and I am a student in room Kauri at Yaldhurst School. I really like this slide about your senses. It made me think of My friends and how they work and what I am working on. A thing they have to do is like their writing and reading. Maybe you could add a front cover.
    Hey if you want to check out my blog here is the link…http://ymslucye.blogspot.co.nz/.

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